The game is pretty decent, but it lacks some important features like a skip button and a save manager. The writing is iffy on one hand the protagonist is written competently, which is really good for a porn visual novel, but on the other the main love interest reeks of patriarchal stereotypes and doesn't show alot of personalty for how much time you spend with her. On top of that, I feel like the opening would stronger if it didn't mention the goblins raping female adventurers, in my opinion doesn't serve the tone of the scene without employing the same cheap trick used in the first episode of "goblin slayer." At the time of writing I am around half way through the game and I will comment my final thoughts a little later!
Tbh I could go without that part, it has too cute of an art style for rape, it could just go "the adventurers rarely return after being captured by them", if you say they get killed or other stuff then at least give an option to do something about it, how am I supposed to play a game like this- I'm having fun with a cowgirl almost right after my party gets killed/raped? That doesn't make much sense lore-wise, the only thing sort of saving it was that the player is far away
I feel like the game does explore the trauma the protagonist has after the opening really well but I doesn't make too much sense from a world building prospective. I wouldn't mind that but it could have been done in a much more sensitive way that doesn't exploit very real issues for cheap shock value.
Yea as some others have mentioned, Risk Dice is severely bugged. I can only play the first round after that i cannot select the dice anymore.
I've done all the normal quests stuff, seen all of Mia's story but i cant get that Greenhaven cards one or progress to the harder risk dice, I reverted to 1.0 so i've done the first risk dice game several times but the game isnt progressing.
tbh the breast slider configuration thing was a big reason i bought this game and despite having unlocked customization its not in there despite being shown on the game page.
Would be great if one was told where the save file gets stored so i could possibly adjust the save myself but i cannot find it anywhere in appdata or any documents folders.
edit: if I have to tell you how to use the windows registry you shouldn't be poking around in there because you can do some serious damage to your pc if you do something wrong
Oh god thats a new level of excessiveness to a simple save lol. Thank you for letting em know! Would you mind going into how exactly you find it in the registry?
I liked the game and art style, but i think the narrative it's little to long (for a hentai game it's massive long). Try to think in something to not bored the player, a fast speed read would help a lot or skip text button.
For some reason in "risk dice" if you pass turn the next time you get the dice you are unable to select them to roll them, they just immediatly deselect
More like a story game then a H-game (2/3 animated scenes)
High cost
Unordered Scenes (so story will sometimes jump ahead and go back)
Unskipable dialogue
No settings (at all)
Summary:
Buy the game only if you are interested in it, but do not go in expecting a lot of h-scenes, this game is more wholesome then your usual nsfw itch.io game.
(7.5/10) rating
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Game good but there definitely seems to be lacking development in some areas (aka not finished/implemented yet). I spent around 1.5hours to finish the game so for 12$ I would say its on the higher end of the price. Character customization is more end game stuff where you unlock once you finish most of the game. The scene gallery isn't too bad however most scenes I felt were too long and unskippable, especially for some scenes you are presented with a black screen and just the dialogue to read for 5min straight (unsure if missing cutscene or supposed to be like that). Scenes unlock order were also a bit messy, since most scenes needed context of the story and unlocking a scene from further on just created more confusion. Minigame missions are a bit too long, most missions required you to play the same game and WIN 5 times, each game took around 2-3min and so for each game you would have to spend a minimum of 15min to finish the corresponding mission, in addition the mission also needed you to complete the respective minigames medium/hard/master modes which were basically the same minigame but more time to complete, which resulted in the game getting more and more boring, however on the bright side I can see that there has been a lot of effort put into the story and it has kept me playing the game. Currently the only bug is for the final minigame, the game usually starts off with you/player starting first but for some reason the game starts off with the bartender and instantly bugs out forcing you to quit the game. Currently there is a coin system of having up to 1000 coins, even after finishing the game I cannot find a single use for the coins, in fact you can have over 1000 coins (3k right now) and the game just does not care haha. However I really liked the design of the dice mini games, you would roll the dice and sometimes it would bounce of the "big milkers" (boobs) of the bartender which I think is a very cool small detail added by the developers. Overall this game has a lot of potential to develop but looking at the developer's older games it seems very unlikely for further development unless there is a huge spike in popularity/sales.
For the developer/s (SatyrKing):
Thank you for making this game very cool game!
I would suggest you to upload the game onto steam where it can gain more attention, I understand steam takes a 100$ fee to upload a game but I believe you will reach a larger audience if you do so, since the quality of the game is above average and I can see it reaching daily highlighted games on steam.
Perhaps if you are interested also start a community server where fans can reach out to you e.g a twitter/discord/etc (as of right now the twitter account is deleted/doesn't exist)
Avoid a larger price for your game, I would suggest you to lower the cost so more people can afford your game e.g: under 5$. Lower cost = more people willing to play. Although I am not saying you should make the game free, I believe the current pricing will not bring you the most benefit.
Further development, I would love to hear your thoughts on the future development of the game, what are your thoughts on coins, other characters (eg: Rina), other locations (e.g: Travelling to Greenhaven to play card/dice games with other residents apart from Mia).
Overall thanks again and don't feel pressured to constantly push out updates and meet fan expectations, I have seen too many developers burn out and stop working on their game because of this.
Thanks for the feedback! Right now I'm working on an update that fixes most of the stuff you mentioned (gold, high minigame requirements, text speed, etc.), plus adds a couple more sex cinematics and fixes a couple bugs. I'll release it as soon as possible ;)
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I ran into a glitch in risk dice preventing you from rolling the dice sometimes at the start of the turn, softlocking you. It's frustrating.
Edit: It happens if you OR Mia get skull dice. The game thinks you can't roll dice again even after it goes back to you.
Ran into the same glitch myself
Needs a better save system i lost my entire save from nothing, and a skip button to dialogs and scenes. It's a cool game and really cute.
needs a fucking skip button
do i need to do anything more when getting the grimoire to access the booba slider?
Risk dice needs to be fixed dosn't work after first roll
i suck at this, is there a way to cheat
The game is pretty decent, but it lacks some important features like a skip button and a save manager. The writing is iffy on one hand the protagonist is written competently, which is really good for a porn visual novel, but on the other the main love interest reeks of patriarchal stereotypes and doesn't show alot of personalty for how much time you spend with her. On top of that, I feel like the opening would stronger if it didn't mention the goblins raping female adventurers, in my opinion doesn't serve the tone of the scene without employing the same cheap trick used in the first episode of "goblin slayer." At the time of writing I am around half way through the game and I will comment my final thoughts a little later!
Tbh I could go without that part, it has too cute of an art style for rape, it could just go "the adventurers rarely return after being captured by them", if you say they get killed or other stuff then at least give an option to do something about it, how am I supposed to play a game like this- I'm having fun with a cowgirl almost right after my party gets killed/raped? That doesn't make much sense lore-wise, the only thing sort of saving it was that the player is far away
I feel like the game does explore the trauma the protagonist has after the opening really well but I doesn't make too much sense from a world building prospective. I wouldn't mind that but it could have been done in a much more sensitive way that doesn't exploit very real issues for cheap shock value.
Yea as some others have mentioned, Risk Dice is severely bugged. I can only play the first round after that i cannot select the dice anymore.
I've done all the normal quests stuff, seen all of Mia's story but i cant get that Greenhaven cards one or progress to the harder risk dice, I reverted to 1.0 so i've done the first risk dice game several times but the game isnt progressing.
tbh the breast slider configuration thing was a big reason i bought this game and despite having unlocked customization its not in there despite being shown on the game page.
Would be great if one was told where the save file gets stored so i could possibly adjust the save myself but i cannot find it anywhere in appdata or any documents folders.
you can only find it in the windows registry
edit: if I have to tell you how to use the windows registry you shouldn't be poking around in there because you can do some serious damage to your pc if you do something wrong
Oh god thats a new level of excessiveness to a simple save lol. Thank you for letting em know! Would you mind going into how exactly you find it in the registry?
how exactly would you "edit" the save from here? very confused on what to do after finding the game
I liked the game and art style, but i think the narrative it's little to long (for a hentai game it's massive long). Try to think in something to not bored the player, a fast speed read would help a lot or skip text button.
For some reason in "risk dice" if you pass turn the next time you get the dice you are unable to select them to roll them, they just immediatly deselect
Are you considering releasing more languages for this game?
Not at the moment, unfortunately
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For the developer/s (SatyrKing):
Thanks for the feedback!
Right now I'm working on an update that fixes most of the stuff you mentioned (gold, high minigame requirements, text speed, etc.), plus adds a couple more sex cinematics and fixes a couple bugs. I'll release it as soon as possible ;)
when free lol
Are the dice rolls fair? I heard from a friend that they're rigged. Is this true?
Yes, they they are completely random, with a really simple AI. I'm working to make the start of the game a little easier:)